Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. One absolutely massive immediate problem: it’s in portrait. This is a professional TV brief and it’s crucial you produce something that could go on Netflix or iPlayer and not look out of place (if you want a top grade). This is effectively a YouTube short which is a completely different type of media. I don’t like the opening POV shot – it feels like a 90s videogame rather than a 2023 TV drama. The prop / blood is OK but the shot lasts too long. I like the heartbeat-style sound effect / music in the background, it’s perfect for building tension. The dialogue communicates meaning but it’s pretty clichéd – it feels like a narrative/character that has been done before. There’s also no clear positioning of the audience in terms of who we are meant to be sympathising with. Are we on his side or not? 2)